Production Concept: Script Development: An Underlying Story

Today I updated my script to make it have more of a purpose than a series of events. I have also added an appearance from some children as we didn't have that to begin with, and would have liked it. I have added a simple underlying story of the pair being invited to a party and having to bring some type of food. On their travels they will make the food and bring it to the party. It is simple but it needs to be for children to follow it.