Professional Practice: Script Error

I started writing my script for my promotional charity video today and realised I had wirtten it in completely the wrong format after writing nearly a page! At least I realised before I had wrote the whole thing. I had started it in a screenplay format instead of a documentary format. This is the startings of it, and now I look at it, I can see why I was sitting in front of the computer screen for an hour trying to figure out why it didnt sound or look right! Here it is anyway...

EXT. WELCOME TO WHF - DAY

African sounding music plays as a time lapse shot of the sanctuary is shown with the sun coming up behind it.

NARRATOR

(voice over)

Around the world, most big cats are endangered from human activities. While many of these animals are elusive to see in the wild, the sight of a big cat can be a life-changing experience.

We see big cats playing, being fed, playing with keepers, music still playing quietly. Mainly cut away's.

NARRATOR

Due to poaching and deforestation, beautiful images like these will become a thing of the past. Roughly 80 percent of the 40 wild cat species are shrinking and sixteen of them are considered vulnerable, endangered, or critically endangered.

EXT. INTERVIEW WITH A KEEPER - DAY

Keeper will be standing either in front of an enclosure with a cat whilst telling audience about the sanctuary and what they do.

KEEPER

Operating a centre of excellence in Kent, UK dedicated to the captive breeding of endangered big cats within the European Endangered Species Programmes (EEP) with the eventual aim of providing animals for scientifically based re-introduction projects. Ect.....................................................................

EXT. WE NEED YOUR HELP - DAY

Narrator carries on voice over while video footage of cats in their natural habitat can be seen.