After discussing my idea with Simon, I have decided to use the same beginning of my story but change the meeting and ending, because my previous idea didn't really have much of a story.
The beginning of the story still being about Joe Wilson working in a news-agents with pushy boss Ed Moore suggesting he lose his virginity as soon as possible. He gives him a card not with an address, but a phone number on it to call the prostitute. Being forced to call the girl on the card, Joe does this and arranges a meeting place and a time.
Emily Rodgers who is the same age as Joe with failing kidneys is also arranging another meeting, but a very different meeting. She has arranged a meeting with her supposed kidney donor.
Emily and Joe do not know each out of other but out of chance they arrange to have their separate meetings in the same place. After Joe picks Emily up and goes to her place and cooks dinner and watches a movie they finally find out that they they are there for completely different reasons. Both feeling embarrassed over their confessions as to why they were there, they admit they enjoy each others company. After they confess and seek affection about their different problems they part on good terms. Following the meeting Joe decides he wants to see Emily again and drives to her house and secretly Emily is pleased he is there to offer her support in her time of need, as her transplant would be happening within the week.
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